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this is so good, please update it. when is hari going to realize the girl he likes is a guy?

Aww, it was the yummy cave sex and the hot mud sex, too! And... isn\'t a bit missing from Shigure\'s explination on why he wants the hot mud sex? Shigure/Aya is the best. ^_^

Maybe it\'s just be, but it seems like a couple chapters kinda disappeared... Poor Haru\'s never gonna get any at this rate. ;.;

Hey hun. Been a while, eh?
did you get booted off of fanfiction.net? Boy if you did... well, let's just say I'm going on a vendetta against whoever runs the site! I didn't know what happened when you suddenly disappeared! Other than the fact that I was very upset and confused. Hey I hate being left in the dark.
Well I think it's pretty obvious when I say that I love this fic. Taken me a while to find you again but better late than never, huh? Glad to see you used the glorious nickname Shiggy and made more than one reference to me! That makes this fanfiction author very happy. One thing though... MORE Aya/Gure porn! I write enough of my own but I never enjoy it as much as I enjoy other peoples! Looking back over that sentence I realize just how bad that sounds...
Oh and BTW, yes people DO read the author biographies. At least I do. Hope you have luck getting your novels published! I'm trying to do the same, though I hardly have any time to write original stuff. Oh well. I'll write fanfiction about your characters though, mark my words!
Great job and best of luck! I'll be reading!

Argh! Damn you! I want more!!! More I say!!! I get what Akito was talking about, now. At least, part of it. Nice concept. I do feel kinda sorry for Kyo and Tohru, tohugh, being all left out and such. Tohru happens to be one in a million lead anime girls I actually like. Go figure. Heh. Well, I've rambled enough and sleep is calling. Great fic so far, keep up the good work, and keep it up soon. In other words, update or die.

This ficie ish GREAT! I can\'t wait to read more; it\'s just so addicting. Ya know? Blah, im starting to ramble, anyways, it\'s very good and I can\'t wait to read more!

~Arukas

hot diggity dog... ^__^ crap crap crappity crap, that was good, minus the little chapter mix up...which nobody would have really noticed since the area of yuki and haru\'s little conversation, and such, don\'t really take any action during the last chapter... so it\'s all good i suppose... ^_^ anwho! keep it a going!!! AYE AYE CAPTAIN!?!??! MWAUAUAUAUUA i don\'t know you, you don\'t know me... but you sure sound like me...when i\'m pumped on pixie sticks... HA HA! XD anywho, SHAZAM keep it going, can\'t wait to check out the chapter where yuki finally gets butt frigged by haru.... COME ON!!! ::is wiggling with anticipation:: don\'t quiet on me now!!! XD!!!!

AWESOME. xD I love it. Sexy. -Pokes bum- Man.... I love you at the moment. oo; I\'ve been horny all day(note; THIS IS A BAD THING. Every time I close my eyes I see two hot dudes at foreplay...), and this was like... soulfood for the danger zone(:o Mad TV reference...)... Meow. Right more. Or I\'ll make you eat feces everytime you talk! :o

nice.
cool story.
can\'t wait for the next chapter.
and can\'t wait for the haru/yuki action. ;p
oh, is there a kyou/yuki acion here?
coz i kinda like yuki wid kyou too..
nweiz, i\'ll be waiting. ;)

Oh, the possibilities!!!! AyaXShi, YukiXKyou, HaruXYuki, with Tohru and Hatori thrown in too!!! (*grins dreamily*) Oh how I miss the Fruits Basket fanfictions! (*bows*) I am humbly in your servforeforever, fanfiction-writer-sama! Keep writing, and let yaoi rule supreme!!! ps- PLEASE PLEASE make more chapters with Hatori! (*hugs*) I love him! lol