rate_review Reviews

nice job, really intense and beautifully done. ^^

that was gorgeous. i admit i haven\'t seen the whole series, but i\'ve read a lot about it as well... now that i look at it closely, Hartia really is very much a moth to Kry\'s flame... write more fics like this- onegai. *bows*

Woo- hoo~!

de-lish-us~!

Yes, yes, yes! Excellent introspective into Hartia and Krylancelo\'s past relationship. Hartia\'s amazingly in-character, and I could almost taste his wistful longing for his best friend. The portrayal of Azalie\'s \'monopoly\' on Krylancelo\'s time and affections fits well into the canon and Orphen\'s relentless search for her in the first series. Of course, smut is always a plus.

I would go back and check how you uploaded this, however. The closing quotation marks show up as an undefinable character and there are several repeated words or extra characters. It detracts from the story and demoralizes you as a writer. Grammar is fine, as is most of the spelling. You obviously know what you\'re doing. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

-Shinimitsukai
shinimitsukai@charter.net

Absolutely beautiful! Your words flow so perfectly, and create an amazing picture. I could see it and feel it so clearly, it was if I was there. Wonderful stuff! Well done! ^_^

Wow.......amazing! Really! I love this...not only for the yaoi goodness, but your desriptions are absolutely beautiful! You have incredible talent!

...... <3 <3 <3

You\'re writing all of my scripts from now on... *prepares rope and large carpet bag* *clears room in closet*


One thing, the formatting on the closing quotation mark comes out as a capital E for me... I have no idea why...

XD I dont think the last one came out... It was basically as follows:

You\'re writing all of my scripts for me from now on... *prepares large carpet bag* *clears room in closet*

One thing, though: The formatting on the ending quotation mark comes out as a capital E on my computer... I dont know why...