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for Relax and Hang On

by cupnjava

person kanzeyori
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic! love your characterizations and the humor and the bits of storyline and background that slipped through ;)

I had to laugh at this tho:
>>Endnotes: I truly hope you have enjoyed this little one. Certainly was interesting to write --- a heterosexual female writing Yaoi.

::giggles:: dude, most readers and writers of yaoi are straight or bi girls. Hell, it's rare to find a *guy* that writes good yaoi.

anyway, just wanted to drop a line to say that I liked your fic! keep up the good work!

-kanzeyori (permetaform on LJ)
person Sheraton
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI *lI *like* this! Your yaoi is well done...good smut indeed. And the little twist at the end makes for a good laugh ... if he ever *does* come to terms with himself, it would be fun to see the scene that followed... //o_0;; Thanks for a good, hot fic.
person ds
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well crap... it was funny, hot, cute. you just managed to make gojyo/hakkai interesting for me again. *pout* now i\'ll have to go hunt down some more of them

good thing this pairing is so predominant in the fandom *grin*
person patrisia
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes yes.......hehehe, another 58 lemon fic!!*waving 58 banner like a crazy*

It\'s kinda hard to find 58 lemon fics nowadays *sighed* IT\'s really cool, ne.
I want more!!!

about people who write yaoi stories, I definitely agree that most of them are heterosex females. All, even.
I just have ONE male friend whom like yaoi, and I\'m lil\' bit curious if he is gay... well,who knows?

ahhh, stop blabbering, just write 58 fic more \'kay?
person guardian of jupiter
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My *favorite* favorite pairing. Love the lemon. Though I would never have guessed Sanzo would be that supportive and cheeky as well! Keep on writing!
person Ouri
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, is that post-coital line from the \"Duck Job\" .wav file?! X D ...lovely bit of smut, this! And doesn\'t it just figure they weren\'t fooling Sanzo a bit? (Not much seems to get past those droopy eyes.)
person Hakuryuu
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, that last sentance absolutely MADE MY DAY!!! XD so funny! Great job... I\'d even like to see a sequel, if you were ever up to it. Nicely done also with outlining quickly all of Hakkai\'s \"sides\" - a great fic!
person Nozomi
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Sanzo\'s comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the best part!

I think you did well on the yaoi bit...and it\'s not weird to be hetero and write yaoi....i do it all the time ^_^;;
person Yamiyugisstalker
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was cute. ^___^ Nothing like a GojyoXHakkai fic to make my day. I liked Sanzo\'s last line. THAT was awesome. Good writing, over-all good job. I throughly enjoyed it.
person mel
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, pretood!ood! ^_^ Of course I\'m biased since you wrote one of my favorite pairings. I\'d definitely like to see more yaoi fics from you in the future!
... by the way, I think most (probably 99%) yaoi writers are actually heterosexual females, so it\'s not that unusual.

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