rate_review Reviews

I LOVE this story so far!!! It is so well-written, and so unusual. Shun is the perfect damsel in distress! ;-) It's great how we can never know what is coming next - a vision of a friend, a loved one attacking him, a monster or two... all very creative! I'm still confused about one thing: can the others see the monsters? Did Toa see the spider, or did Shun just assumed so?

Anyway, I love reading about people being scared, love horror and suspense movies, so this story is a huge chocolate sundae with a sweet cherry on top! Great job.

The one thing I would change (in the future) is doing a spell check. MS Word does that for you, as I'm sure do many other tools; it takes 5 min and it makes the reading soooo much better. Sometimes a badly spelled word can detract a lot from the story.

One of these days when you're bored, read my story on ff.net... I'd love to hear what you think. It's also a "Shun in distress/danger" plot, except it's not supernatural. Ikki is evil in it.

Now, on to chapter 5! :-)

Hey, sick is good!!! (It can never be too sick...)

Love this chapter!

Oh, no! More, more, more!!! Dying for more, in fact!!!

When you update, pretty please, let me know... or else I'll surely miss it.

Oops. The last review for this was in 2006. That probably means I'm out of luck in seeing any more future chapters. [crouches on a corner and bawls]

I think this is the best ghost story I have ever read and that is saying a lot. I really hope you continue this story soon. It is too awesome to leave unfinished.

Hello, new fan here. I really enjoy the story so far. Poor Shun had to have the worst experience ever.... Hope nothing bad happens to him or Hyoga. :( I look forward to more chappies!

Please, please, please, please update...PLEASE!! I LOVE this story. Please don\'t leave it like this.

I love your story!! and don\'t worry i\'m not one of those readers who will ran away from too much described gory scenes *cackle*
I really like how you exploited the characters, and i love the way you write, it\'s really fluent and easy to read =3
and i don\'t mind Tao at all, she seems good for Ikki.
just one thing ticked me off...Camus with red hair?? o_O

P.S: if you ever need help with french words, ask me! xD

And please write the next chapter as soon as you can *o*

Please, do not stop writing. T___T Your history is one of my favorites.
There was a problem with AdultF.net and I\'ve got the new URL only yesterday.
Love the way you write about Ikki and Shun\'s brotherly relationship. Keep on going. ^^

Woah wierd! Cool! Evil dream though. He\'s not gonna go nuts and kill Hyoga is he??? Oo Anyway, next chapter.