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by mizu

person Hestia
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really clever and well done! It wasn't clear where things were going, but where they went seem so right and natural. This was funny, hot, and romantic--a great combination. Thanks for sharing!
person Justajester
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...how cute. I tyhink I might go join the police academy and try to get Ted for myself :D

I loved it, by the way. Suprb! BRAVO BRAVISSIMO!!! XD
person Amaryllis Cage
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah that was so cute! I especially love how you ended it...very perfect.
person MistressofDisaster
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!!
I LOVE IT!
rofl,lol
Oh my god the last part was so funny ,don`t misuderstand me the whole story was but wow .......
I`m still laughing and I stopped reading almost 10 minutes ago !
Just keep on writing! You`ve got talent !
*hugs*
MD
person beady
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! it was so cute!!!!! you\'ve made me and many other readers very, very happy. however, i have mixed feelings about this amnesia fic business. on the one hand, i think you would do an amazing job and it would be a pleasure to read, buuut on the other, hand, i\'ve been working on an amnesia fic of my own. then again, i\'ve never actually finished a fic, and i know you\'ve finished at least one ^_~ awww screw it. go ahead. yours\'ll probably be better than mine anyway, and we need a good amnesia fic to counter all the not-so-good ones out there *shudders* believe me, i\'ve read them. awaiting your next... erm... whatever it is you happen post. ^_^
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME ENDING!! ^_^ Glad to see the day I come home from the long work weekend there is an update! Thanks!! And a great ending to a great fic! Awesome job on the whole thing ^_^
person Hong Mee
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful and touching. I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAD DRAKE ALL AGGRESSIVE. Drake and JJ just make my day and that was truly beautiful the way you had them \"the morning after\".

And poor Ted! *laugh* I would have LOVED to see Bikky walk through the door. Now THAT would have been hilarious.

Anyway, great job! Fantastic twist of prompt.
person beady
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!! you\'re driving me crazy!!!!!! when do we get to find out about the morning after??? huh??? there are some readers out here in readerland wondering what the hell is going on!!!! *ahm* scuse me. sorry bout that. none of the fics i\'m reading have been updater, and i\'m kinda cranky. i apoligize. but seriously, an update would make many people supremely happy. this fic is awesome, so don\'t let it die, k? and UPDATE!!!!!
person Cole\'sLover
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better with every chapter. Keep up the great work. Drake and JJ deserve some happiness and I\'m glad to see that you\'ve developed their characters as a couple in the storyline too.
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wasn\'t able to review before I don\'t think, so if it didn\'t go through here it is. AWESOME CHAPTER!!! ^_^ Very nice! Ct wat wait to see what happens next with JJ and Drake!! ^_^

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