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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tacklemolest* You were right about that sex scene being hot *melts* I haven\'t read any Weiss in a while, so it was nice to take a break from KKM and return to it for a little bit. Very nice work, very angsty (which I loooove). You are a fantastic author, darling, I must read the rest of your Weiss and HP stuff...and once I finally get around to watching Saiyuki, then those too ^^
<3 Love ya! Keep up the awesome writing!
<3 Love ya! Keep up the awesome writing!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Strangely intriguing were the two words that came to my mind when I finished reading this. You have perfect execution of the plot and the elements involved. I know that if this same story were written by anyone else it wounldnt have had the same impact. I like your interpretation of the violent sort of passion that Yohji and Aya share. Also the way you seemlessly mingle emotion into the characters is very convincing. The only constructive criticism I have is that the ending could have been a little longer. Althought you chose to end it at the climax and left an impression, I found myself wondering what happened after that. Other than that, great work.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Wow!
I liked it....Okay, I loved it...I was on the edge of my seat through the last few chapters, wondering which way it was going to go, would Aya take Yohji back? The ending is slightly predictable, but no matter because it was artfully done! You are a skilled writer and bring Aya and Yohji alive!
Thank you for sharing!
Apollo
Wow!
I liked it....Okay, I loved it...I was on the edge of my seat through the last few chapters, wondering which way it was going to go, would Aya take Yohji back? The ending is slightly predictable, but no matter because it was artfully done! You are a skilled writer and bring Aya and Yohji alive!
Thank you for sharing!
Apollo
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi^^ I hope that U dont let aya/ran die, it is so sad to keep reading other fics and I realy like this story. I hav just seen all of the 25 episodes and I think their great! Even better when I can read fics and know how their faces look like! Sorry for my bad grammar--; Dont let AYA/RAN die, I am begging U! //black kitten
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start i want to read some moree, i really like how its started =) look forward to the rest of it
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I read about half the chapter. I\'m really liking this fic, I love your writing style (it reminds me of mine^^) I will leave a more detailed review as soon as I finish the chapter, I started reading it but something came up but I felt the need to tell you what a wonderful job you\'re doing^^ Later
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