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August 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, nothing better than a good three in one!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...wow. This was the perfect combination of sexy and funny and heartwarming, and the bit at the end about the strap-on and Jinpei being traumatized made me laugh out loud. (I'm a pending fan of this series - I haven't gotten to see it yet but I've read reviews and I want to watch and compare the JP version and all 3 dubs. *laugh* And if I can keep finding goodfic like this...)
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has become a favorite of mine - I'm a real sucker for a Ken/Joe/Jun threesome (for that matter Mark/Jason/Princess works too!). Very well written, with the characterisations intact.
Just a coiuple of things that did really nag at me: Jun;s eyes are green and she's the Swan, not the Dove.
The only other one is technical: speech is always a new sentence. You finish the sentence before, then start the speech with a capital.
But I loved it!!
Just a coiuple of things that did really nag at me: Jun;s eyes are green and she's the Swan, not the Dove.
The only other one is technical: speech is always a new sentence. You finish the sentence before, then start the speech with a capital.
But I loved it!!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You *must* write more of these! This is some of the best slash I\'ve ever read (I only like Gatch/BotP fanfic). A few typos, and errors -- #1 Jun does not have blue eyes. Hers are emerald green. (Ken is the one known for his baby blues. And Joe\'s are a stormy violet or grey-blue). #2 Jun is the Swan, not the Dove. But it\'s still an A+ story.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, wonderful...I always new that Ken needed a release.. but this story was done just right and quite tasteful too. please continue the story line or make another.