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for Schoolboy Crush

by craxy

person KD
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was steamy!! love that!! Write another one!
person KD
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I know some writers are born evil.. you for example... haha.. just kidding..
Hey, Aya has 2 completely different characters in your fic@!! I love it though! When are you updating? (wails) I want to see more!!
P/s: that\'s very cruel of you, you know.. to end it there.. updASAPASAP!
person lo
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Very well done!! I think you could elaborate more on character, fellings, thoughts, and just the charactthemthemselves, but very well done!!!!!!
person Emerae
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh you ARE evil ^_____^;;
person Somali
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s sweet how Aya checks if Omi is having a temperature by putting their cheeks together. That\'s just so sweet *grins* Yes, you\'re evil!!! More soon???
person Kai is mine
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No u can\'t stop there u have to cont. Great start =) more more please hehe
person Sky Rat
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you stopped *there*?!
person KD
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic!!! please update asap!! I love Aya/ Omi...

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