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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tried to do something like this before and it came out terrible, but let me just say, yours came out spectacular! I was totally in the moment and thought it very steamy even with it being as subtle as it was. It\'s important that when you write something that\'s not hardcore, you\'ve got to keep it...what\'s the word...consistant, and you did that. This was very well written in pretty much every aspect! I really appreciate work like this! Toodle-o!
PS...: It was sexy, too! Long live lemons!
J3
PS...: It was sexy, too! Long live lemons!
J3
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me likes. It\'s been too long since I last read good Aya/Yohji lemon. Thank you for writing one. n.n