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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Serendipity of Sophia
Review: Lexie on the loose!!!!. Just finished reading Parallel Lines. It’s a definite winner... After 77 pages of smart, unpredictable, wild & enchanting story line, ( Yep, I downloaded all Parallel Line Chapters ^_^) my favorite Samurai and Gang in a definitely volatile setting . The plot development is superb . Loved it. Obsessed with it. It is explicitly worth staying up till 2 AM to finish it. Definitely can’t wait for a sequel… and the next one after that….You see, the amazing thing about your story is that it does not disappoint us readers. It’s made out of pure originality while superimposing the innate individuality of the characters … it was like watching a different story but all together the same… a Superb story…. This self-confessed die-hard fan fiction fanatic goes catatonic at the idea of a sequel….. Whooooo…. A new chapter!!! (dances wildly around)… Assassin and long ago rivals.. Man . and to think you managed to get all pilot characters into the show without sacrificing their persona is truly amazing ….Talk about world-class….. The story is so well crafted it is possibly one of the best stories in the network. No not possibly, Absolutely!!… Another solid Lexie chronicle. Satisfying……. I can just picture everything that happens in the story. That’s how well detailed your narrative is. And I often repeat the words out loud just to marvel at the plot you created. Your story can be read and re-read many times without losing grip and interest. Character-merging, plotting, story line structuring, … all done to perfection. (makes my mouth water in obvious envy) Hope to see your next Story updated sooner than later. How Soon is Now???? ^_^ Keep it up >……^_^ To sum it up in just a few words.. It’s one heck of a terrific story.
Note: Just one question bothers me the most….why is everybody grabbing everybody’s breast’s??? well,,, never mind… kinda makes me wonder, that’s all hehehe… Aoshi still sounds hot… Huh-huh-!!!!
Thoughts: I really really commend your efforts in pacing the story. But could you please please update a new story. Truth be told, I’m dying in unbearable anticipation here…. What’s going to happen next????? It’s like watching a telenovela when suddenly it gets cancelled and there’s no way of telling when I’ll see it again…. Please feel for me…huhuhu……
Thoughts Part II : it’s really a good thing I browse a lot or I would be able to see your post in adult fan fiction net. Do you have your own journal or sumthing??? ^_^
Review: Lexie on the loose!!!!. Just finished reading Parallel Lines. It’s a definite winner... After 77 pages of smart, unpredictable, wild & enchanting story line, ( Yep, I downloaded all Parallel Line Chapters ^_^) my favorite Samurai and Gang in a definitely volatile setting . The plot development is superb . Loved it. Obsessed with it. It is explicitly worth staying up till 2 AM to finish it. Definitely can’t wait for a sequel… and the next one after that….You see, the amazing thing about your story is that it does not disappoint us readers. It’s made out of pure originality while superimposing the innate individuality of the characters … it was like watching a different story but all together the same… a Superb story…. This self-confessed die-hard fan fiction fanatic goes catatonic at the idea of a sequel….. Whooooo…. A new chapter!!! (dances wildly around)… Assassin and long ago rivals.. Man . and to think you managed to get all pilot characters into the show without sacrificing their persona is truly amazing ….Talk about world-class….. The story is so well crafted it is possibly one of the best stories in the network. No not possibly, Absolutely!!… Another solid Lexie chronicle. Satisfying……. I can just picture everything that happens in the story. That’s how well detailed your narrative is. And I often repeat the words out loud just to marvel at the plot you created. Your story can be read and re-read many times without losing grip and interest. Character-merging, plotting, story line structuring, … all done to perfection. (makes my mouth water in obvious envy) Hope to see your next Story updated sooner than later. How Soon is Now???? ^_^ Keep it up >……^_^ To sum it up in just a few words.. It’s one heck of a terrific story.
Note: Just one question bothers me the most….why is everybody grabbing everybody’s breast’s??? well,,, never mind… kinda makes me wonder, that’s all hehehe… Aoshi still sounds hot… Huh-huh-!!!!
Thoughts: I really really commend your efforts in pacing the story. But could you please please update a new story. Truth be told, I’m dying in unbearable anticipation here…. What’s going to happen next????? It’s like watching a telenovela when suddenly it gets cancelled and there’s no way of telling when I’ll see it again…. Please feel for me…huhuhu……
Thoughts Part II : it’s really a good thing I browse a lot or I would be able to see your post in adult fan fiction net. Do you have your own journal or sumthing??? ^_^
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo amazing. One of the best I\'ve read for this anime, which is even more great because it\'s an AU!
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap man. I figured this would just be another PWP lemon. That was great. For being an adult story, you kept the sex scenes tasteful and suprisingly minimal (well, except for the ending, which did go out with a, well, \"bang\"?)><. Lol, anywho, I loved how you converted the entire RK story into modern terms. I was a little dissapointed in Saitou\'s limited role and shallowness...but, hey, he\'s my fav character, so that\'s why. But other than that, I loved it man. Have you done any other stories? Email me back, man.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the best I have read in a long time. Great job ^^
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why did you re load this story? i read this on fanfiction.net, is this one different? plz e-mail me!!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did put an explanation at the beginning of part I, but I\'ll put another one here: For some reason Chapter 9 was missing, so instead of uploading all the individual files again, I consolidated all the chapters into parts I & II. It\'s the same story, so if you\'ve read it before, it\'s nothing new.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! thanku u actually finished. i\'m so happy! awesome fic. u\'ve got lots of talent. keep at it!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo!!!! Write something else quick!!! this was fabulous!
Tsuki-san
Tsuki-san
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was a really good story!!^.^ u deserve a great rating.. but i love how each pair ended up happy.. but wut about cute lil yahiko?. i really wanted him to be with some1..
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A perfect citrusy ending for this story -- I loved it! You did a great job translating all of the characters to a modern setting, and the balance between their relationships and the main action of the story was good. What am I gonna read now that it\'s finished?