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for Parallel Lines

by Lexie

person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!! but ya know... k&k isnt going too fast to me, but if your going to make this realistic, he wouldnt fall love at first site ^____^ update soon!!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this... an interesting perspective to look at Kenshin\'s life from... and an interesting way to bring Kaoru into it. I will be quite intrigued to see where all of this is going to go, and I have perfect faith in you to pull it off. Very well done.
Tsuki-san
person Kaoru-chan
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes a new chapter *dances for joy* ...... Can\'t wait for the next one ^^x




(^^*^ KaorKaoru-sama/Kaoru-chan/ChibiKaoru^*^^)
person catti-dono
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH, Kenshin broke up with Megumi, still could not see that relationship, bleah. Keep it up lexie-san.
person crAzibuNNi
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!! *falls out of chair leg twis*
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that was freakin amazing!!!!! i loveeeee au fics please please update soon
*holds up cookie as bribe*
^_^
Ja Ne
person yue
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh. i like this. its interesting. so far i think its very well written and the scenes just flow. well i hope u update soon.
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you are doing a GREAT job for your first epic. Things are moving very smoothly and evenly. Your descriptions and emotiore qre quite believable and your characters are well defined. Keep it up girly... I believe you can go the distance.
Tsuki-san
person KAoru-chan
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooo yea ... that was a great chapter up until I got to Megumi and Kenshin F*kin each other.... demo .... at the end I was laughing my head off... poor Kenshin is Jealous over little Kaoru... ^^x I wonder who Kaoru is going to be with eh??? Yahiko.... Sano..... or may be even Kenshin o^ ^o Tee Hee Hee .......



~*~**~*~*Kaoru-chan/ChibiKaoru~*~*~**~*~*~

* Sometimes the right thing should always be the thing that people should honor*


^^x........ Kenshin
person Piper
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. More!
person Froggy
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. More!

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