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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, if Kaoru started going with Sano, then Megumi could get jealous too, then her and Kenshin would be trying to get both Sano and Kaoru!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo! More PLZ! I like it so far! Poor megitsune she\'s going to be out of a sleeping partner and one hell of a Jealous bitch I assume.. ne way look\'n forward to what ever is next!
Ja ne!
~*Peace*~
Mimi
Ja ne!
~*Peace*~
Mimi
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, well-written, with good characterization. The reversal of having Yahiko think Kaoru is beautiful -- delightful! And the banter between Yahiko and Sano as Sano explains how \"girl years\" work was hilarious. Keep up the good work!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story. I\'m a die-hard K&K person, but I\'d much rather if Megumi and Kenshin\'s relationship didn\'t end because of Kaoru getting between them - like, let it end naturally, know what I mean? Things like that happen all the time, like it was good while it lasted but you get bored with each other after a while, drift apart movemove on to other people without losing affection as friends or being all \"I h8 u\". And I never liked the \"Megumi\'s a total skank-ho bitch\" fics. ;) Loved it so far!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yahiko and Kauro, yewwwwwwwwwwww, but strangly fascinating. Lets see where this will go.ne?
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good for the most part. I only had a problem with one word:
\"Cock\"
I simply detest that slang term for \"penis\", LOL. But other than that, it\'s very interesting. I will be checking for updates.
\"Cock\"
I simply detest that slang term for \"penis\", LOL. But other than that, it\'s very interesting. I will be checking for updates.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Good story, good characterization. If it keeps this way, you might give Linay and \"Broken Pieces\" a run for their money. Update soon.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEEEW, Megumi and Kenshin?!?!?!? YUCK!!! Tsuki-sama would be displeased!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW I loved it ^^ I can\'t wait for the next chapter ^^ I love your stories there so original im glad u keep comip w/p w/ these great ideas! ^o^ .... I hope the next chapter will be out very soon.... or otherwise I may die from waiting so very long ^^x...
*keep in touch to who you are.... and u shall do great things*
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Kaoru-ch*#*#*#*#*#*#
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*keep in touch to who you are.... and u shall do great things*
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Kaoru-ch*#*#*#*#*#*#
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I can\'t wait till the next chapter comes out.