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for Parallel Lines

by Lexie

person Birdy06
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh!That was such a great chpt!Please,please,please update soon.Arigatou!
JA NE!
person De Lazy Lady Lime
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la! Shishio and Kenshin battle royal...ho hum...Well alls well that ends well.. It is going to end well isn't it?
person kallipygia
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY, you updated! Just what I need to combat my mid-moving depression. Great climax, I can hardly wait to see how you're going to resolve it! :)
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woooot update
lol thanks i love this story
such good writing
well anywho cant wait for the next one
person kallipygia
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like lemons, but don't feel like you need to sacrifice your story to squeeze them in -- this is a great adventure, and I'm enjoying seeing everying in action in their AU personas. Also can't wait to find out who the Mole is! :eep eep up the good work...
person Birdy06
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please,please,please update as soon as possible. Arigatou! JA NE!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I thought my cliffies were bad....... this one has mine beat all to poop.
The greatness of this tale almost makes the wait for AFF to get its butt back on track worth it.
Outstanding!

Tsuki-san
person Lexie
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lime, I know--the lemons haven't really been there, but somehow it didn't seem quite right... You should always wait til it feels right, heh heh! So no real hot and heavy between K&K yet, but do stress the YET--there will have to be some juicy waffy lemons before the story is done :)
person kallipygia
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a wonderful job with this fic! The developing relationship between Sano and Megumi is very sweet, and the sexual tension between Aoshi and Misao is a nice balance.
person De Lazy Lime
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG....Man...15 chapters and still all we have is a Kenshin/Megumi lemon... a Sano/ Megumi..eh limeishness AND well it would seem to me that Megumi is getting all the action here WITH all the cute guys no less. well except Aoshi and for love of ...please no Megumi and Aoshi~whatever as I am POSTIVE you won't do that.

okay so that is just the lemon~head side of me complaining.

I still love the fic story line and characters... just a little more of a lemon~head than I thought I was...
Ah and I as well as others seemed to have totally missed what ever it was that thing you gave away or messed up. See what good attentive readers we are!! O.Ox Those of us who caught it will surely kick ourselves later on.

SEMI-patiently I wait for the next chappie... since this chappie is sending Kenshin away is this ONE night going to last like 3 chapters? So that we don;t get K/K till like chapter 23? :( I don't want the story to end but...

Oh well what ever you decided to do will be fine with me.

De Lazy Lime

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