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for Parallel Lines

by Lexie

schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is ise. se. How did Kaoru become homeless? And where is she? teehee...she has a couple of guys crushing on her. I like it. :)
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i love this story
its so good, i cant wait till the next chapter
person Kallipygia
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH! I've been waiting for you to post the next chapter. Great job bringing everyone together -- and who would have thought that Kaoru would be working with Saitou? AAAAAH! Must...read...more... Can hardly wait for the next step in the story!
person girl from ipanema
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Too short! This is too good for just such homeopathic dosages. So Aoshi is in the team now, huh? I like it. When do we get some citrus? Ah, the pressure!
person mad reader
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED? WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE?
person Lexie
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Shadowen, that was funny! I apologize for not being more he bhe ball with the writing, but rest assured that further chapters are in the works. I've just been too busy of late. Gomen! :)
person Shadowen
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sits in front of Lexie* *pulls out watch* *waves watch in front of Lexie's eyes* You are getting sleepy...*watches Lexie fall asleep* Now when I snap my fingers you will write another chapter for Parallel Lines. *snaps fingers* ^-^
person A.J.
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great chapter!! Full of actiony goodness and a declaration of love--who could want more?! Me of course*wink* You did a fab job on this chapter and I anxiously look forward to the next one.
person girl from ipanema
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think these two last chapters do work better. Great suspense...Both in the plot and in the KK relationship. It is going to kill all of us.
person Animelover
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved how your story was going in the start, but after a while you started to move to Sano and Megumi and Misao and Aoishi, now I hardly even read about Kenshin and Kaoru anymore, it makes me very sad I wish you would right more chapters on the real main characters instead of going back and forth between them.



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