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ahh very very very veyçry interesting plot , please continue it as soon as possible , ilie a lot yourwritingand eventhough the secret-agent idea is a bit cliched its always good to readthese ficcies, specially if they are nice written such as yours. congrats for the good work and keepit on, ah, i forgot, very orioginal de idea of having kaoru giving kenshin his \"humanity\" bac , that i had not seen before,congrats ,and please please please update soon!:D see ya r! kr! kao...
ps: i must admit id idnt like the lemon between ken and megumi , that was just for a reason of ideas, asmy perfect couple is kenhshin and kao, but i assume it was necssary for the continuing of the story, sokeep it up and let us get more kxk moments!

oh the misao touch was cute. lol. great chapter by the way. hope u update soon.

Hey! Another KEWL chappie! You\'re doing real great! No lemon for this new chapter but... I can keep my.... \'. \'hunger pangs\' down. Hee hee...
Great fight scene! I\'m just wondering though, will Misao fall for Aoshi? Think think...
Give it a little more KxK! I need it more than I need LEMON-ade. >.< And I\'m supposed to be a Tenshi too...
Ja ne!!

OOOOHHHH, this is so much fun!!! and better still, you update REGULARLY! Most humble thanks and praise from your fans.

Writing battle scenes is hard, but you did a great job! I loved this chapter, and your characterization of Misao et al. was excellent. Keep up the good work! (You are going to bring Saitou into this story at some point, right?he ahe asks hopefully-)

The fight scene was great... and you\'re right, they are hard to write. But you did an outstanding job. Kept me right on the edge of my seat, and I could see what was going on the whole time. You sure managed to mess ebodybody up rather decently without getting them quite dead :) Excellent. And the story line is fleshing out very well. I am liking this more and more with each chapter. Updates are expected. :)
Tsuki-san

hi. nice fic. i like this one cause itz all secret agent like. this is a great fic. plzz update! ^ _ ^

Honestly, you have a pretty good thing here for you. The diction is commendable, not to say the least, and the characterization is great. However, when I checked out what everybody else wrote in their reviews for this story, I happen to come by one that spoke of Linay\'s \"Broken Pieces.\" To be laconic, yet not saf to to consider ad hominem, there are just too many stories out there that appear to be like BP. Come on now, I am not saying that this fiction can be one of those hundred-stories-somewhere-out-there, but it seems it can take the course of that literary tirade. I am not trying to make this a flame, but just spill out what I feel of your literary work, giving some form of constructive criticsim. The story flows well, and so do the characters that make up the plot\'s personality. But try to elaborate more on things, try building suspence, make the reader want more. This way, you can really grasp readers\' attentions and keeped them hooked; but you did a good job at that. What I was only trying to point out was that there are so many Dark AUs out there, that replacate BP; that have an assassin and a vulnerable girl; there\'s just too much of that! Something new can be of good. Maybe you can be the one to come up with somethying more than just ordinary with this story, cause obviously, you have the makings and capabilities of it!

That story of yours is really cool. Can you complete it? I really love it, that I do. It would be great if you did some more of this. I\'ll be waiting for your next update!

Ahhh, very similar to a certain OVA storyline. It\'s still very good.