rate_review Reviews

Hi there, I just have to review this wonderful story. You wrote Tadaima too, didn't you? I remember being impressed by that one about a year and a half ago. I must have read it ten times. Anyway, Test Drive was an exciting and engrossing story, but believable and realistic. Nowhere was it over the top. It was very hot, very sensual foreplay, written with skill and restraint. My favorite line was this one:

With effort, Dee focused on Ryo. “Don’t stop, Ryo,” he finally murmured, “I can take it.”

Both men were perfectly in character, too. Another thing I appreciate is that you write your Dee and Ryo as believable males. Are you planning to update this one? I would love to read what happens next when Ryo takes Dee on a "Road Trip!" I wish I had investigated the back pages of the Fake section earlier. Thank you for writing and posting this. I want to read more Fake stories by you!

I like how you have Dee saying Baby and his suppressed thoughts! Ryo struggle to be good is so adorable! Thanks for sharing this one!

might have to try that one day when i really need some pleasure when we are in the car and busy on a job

You need to update soon.

I think more people should read this story. I thought you did a really great job telling it. It was fun that they took turns like that, heh heh. I thought it was well written, no problems for me to read it. Look forward to reading anything more you might have to write sometime. Keep up the good work.

Great! Fantastic! Wonderful job of these two in a car making out! Dee going to keep his eyes open, yeah right! Saw that one happening before you got to the point of writing it! Well written out.

the more I read it, the more I love it!! *grins* Keep it up ^o^