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Yes, by all means, make a sequel! I'm dying to see what happens next!

This was an AAML that wasn't all straight-to-the-point-sex. Instead it had the characters develop and I was almost taken aback when I thought they would never get together! But really, your writing amazes me!

that was a great story. I will be looking forward to a sequel, unless of course there is already one in which case i really want to read that too.

sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel, SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

This story is excellent, it\'s nice to see something of literary value here from time to time, and this certainly qualifies. The characters seem natural, they follow the path put before them with unerring consistancy. The supplemental characters are also natural, in their own ways hindering or helping them with only their own desires in mind. Personally, I was actually quite pleased when you decided to skip any kind of graphic scene in the story. In a story as romantic as this, the baseness of such a scene might actually take away from the general warming effect the story had. I personally don\'t think you should write a sequel, because the story is perfectly contained and fulfilling on its own. However, I definitely think that you should continue writing stories, with the same characters or not. The descriptions are generally exceptional, although once or twice they seemed overdone, that is somewhat approprite for the genre. My only bit of constructive criticism is related to a single bit of first person thinking so to speak. Saying what a character thinks is quite different from having the characters exact thoughts. Normally, I\'m only used to seeing one characters exact thoughts in a story, but in a romance, it\'s understandable to have both of their thoughts specifically mentioned, particularly when you divide who we are getting primary information from by seperating the story into little scenes, which you did very well. My minor grumble is that when Rudy, who is not one of the two primary characters has his specific thoughts written out, it feels like a POV shift, and is a bit distracting. All in all, excellent fic, keep up the good work.

Friggin awesome story! Best bloody romance thing I ever read, and I don\'t usually do romancy stories! Top notch!

hey great story...one think though if you happen to write a sequel you should go in depth about the night they shared and I stress in depth!!!!;) anyways awesome story!!!

omg that story was AMAzING! i was a bit bummed that it wasnt a lemon, but the story makes up for it! wonderful!!

This was the most beutiful misty/ash pairing I have ever read. Hell this was one of the best pairing stories I have ever read. Please keep writing

Hey this story is super familar. Oh yeah it was in ff.net. That is not fair that you got kicked out. Hmm, very strange. So you lost my review from there. But I going to review again. This was a great story, I loved it to start to finish, Think about writing a squeal. Pretty please? This was really good. Well keep up the good work. See-ya.

wow, ash in the pokemon gang drunk in the future. wish i could have seen that episode. and the lovey bits were kinda cute, ash is such a dope. i loved it! but call me a pig if you will cause i would have liked to read the sex in more detail. once again, loved it a lot. write another.