rate_review Reviews

Hmm, I should've left you a comment on this before, because really, it's the best Gravi fiction I've ever found. Unusual, as you said in your author notes, that it's heterosexual sex, but it's just beautiful, a lovely study of these two characters.

The best part, for me, is the maro-polo game they play at the beginning, then again at the middle, and the confession that none of the "presents" has ever stayed the night. A good fic about how good it can be to have sex with your spouse, not just seeking the thrill of a stranger.

Great fic, dear. I really enjoyed reading it!

~MQ

Miaka!

Tamahome!

MIAKA!!

TAMAHOME!!

MIIIIAAAKAAA!!!

TAMAAAAHOOOMEEE!!!

That is sweet... I always thought that although Tohma loved Eiri, it was more of a brother/brother type love. Mika did not come across as the type of woman who would marry a man who had the hots for her brother instead, so it is refreshing to see a fanfic written about this couple :)

Thank you for this!

So sweet! ^_^

Hey

Odd, but welcomed. It was weat too I\'m even crying it was good.

Absolutely loved it!

Awe, that was sooo incredibly schweet! ^__^ I liked it very much!

edited! yay! To bad tohma couldn\'t have lied about not sleeping with any of the \'Eiris...it owuld make for a nice story....\'

Kei_Chan, the errors were actually a system/site glitch. I fixed it so it is back to how it looked when I originally posted it, thanks for pointing it out, I never would have noticed since I wrote/posted the story awhile ago.

Ok this is the first time I\'ve ever left a review on this site so I hope you get it. I am an aspiring fanfiction writer myself and I have never seen this pairing in a Gravitation ficcie! Kudos to you for writing a sweet romantic Touma-Mika story without making it dirrty or sad. I\'m sure Mirakami-san would be honored with your potrayal of her sweet couple!