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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I don\'t mind the pairing at all! thought it was interesting. Okay so you wanted advice. Never use nibbling when talking about thit, it, no one wants that nibbled. and they went pretty fast from kiss and next sentence he\'s talking off her pants. Also don\'t rush so fast through the actual sex/penetration. But I like your story and liked that you had various scenes. Oh and should have explained more how they had wanted each other for so long.