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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! what a great story!!! i love it ^_^ keep on writing good fictions ^^
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like!! I love Hyoga and Shun! And ofcourse, Shiryu and Seiya were cute, too! Nice hot ficcy you have here. ^^
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa =) that was pretty intense, I LIKED IT A LOT!!! you have a talent there... then you seemed to read my mind because I like the pairings you used too.
I hope to read some more of you... a secuel to this one would be great or just other story... im babbling now =) see you...
I hope to read some more of you... a secuel to this one would be great or just other story... im babbling now =) see you...
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's a great lemon but it's not want i'm looking for. i don't know, maybe it's me, but why does everyone like shun? he's not that strong. i used to think he was cute but then i saw he was whiney. if i could make a good lemon, it would be between shiryu and hyoga. that's what i want to see. but everybody LOVES shun. why can't hyoga and shiryu have wild hot sex? if you think about it, they look hot together.
but that's just me. your story's great.
a fan.
kenshinjunkie03
but that's just me. your story's great.
a fan.
kenshinjunkie03
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best 4somes I've ever read. Easy to follow, sexy and romantic. Wonderful job. You rock!!!!!
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. i never thought that a foursome would ever work but it worked out great. i couls never think of all the things you put in there. WOW! i thought that you might have put Ikki in there and make it fivesome but that would have been weird with shun there i guess. i had a mind that the tape was Ikki\'s, he seems the type to be a total hentai. keep up the great work and creative stories. i\'m sure you\'ve made alot of yaoi obsessed fangirls happy. i know you made me giddy with excitement.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hella funny man!! It was Ikki`s after all. I can`t believe it!! It was very shocking. I thought Shun would come, then Seiya, followed by Hyouga, and last Shiryu. Great story, though. Loved Every bit!
Nyan, Mew Inu
Nyan, Mew Inu
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Just perfect! Those four ficking this way is the best thing ever. I love PWP lemon stories, and yours was great. No misunderstood love and stuff, just hard rough sex. Please, writesome more like this.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! LOL! That kicked so much ass! And was veeeerrryyy HOT!! XDD LMAO! The ending was great! >< Ikki\'s tape! *dies* ahah XDDDD
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a great story. I really enjoyed it. Hope you update soon! I really love your other works. You should write more often.