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An interesting read, although difficult at times due to typographical errors. It has an interesting flow with a fast shift between character points of view which does get a touch confusing at times. The oddest part is the formatting blocks that break up sentence structures. IF not for those breaks it would have been easier to read with enjoyment. Perhaps in time you will reformat this fic and do a spell check, which would make it much more enjoyable reading. I like the concept you have with this story, and would love ot be able to read it without so many distractions. I hope you will continue writing in the future.

I loved your story!!! The detail you put into the racing was liking watching on TV:) I like Ryo/Tak together. Even though Tak got sick it was (hot)mmm when they were getting on:) But Kei was sweet to Tak so I understand his attraction to him. I secretly hope he would get with Ryo and end his one night stands with true love:) Your story had me gluded to my seat untill I had finished. Thanks for the great read. I'll check ever now and then to see if you come back to add more. (which I hope you do):)

I really loved your story! Please update or write sequel!

I like the plot so far, worry not, I know nothing about cars either^^ (I\'ve only read CH1 so far) The only thing I can tell you, is that sometimes you tend to go too much into detail. Detailing is good, but too much of it makes the reader lose track of the main action. I had to go back and re-read a couple of times. Also I think there is a part missing somewhere in the chapter, I mean one parragraph Ryosuke and Takumi are leaving the hosue, and the next Takumi is drunk and pucking. Other than that very good job.

This is me again. I read CH2 and again the details take away from the overall enjoyment, you get too repetitive at times. There is a chunck overlapping, I thought I was having flashbacks as I read it (is the part when Keisuke asks Takumi who he\'s slept with^^) Other than that The plot thickens... don\'t tell me Takumi gives it a go With Keisuke too o.O little bitch get around huh? my mom always told me the quiet ones are the worst^^ Well see you when I finish the next chappy. Keep up the Good work.

I loved this chapter although I was a little confused at Bunta joining the race. Then he did a 180 on his earlier view of his son's sexuality. To be honest I thought that he might have killed all 3 guys. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Whaaaa! Kirei! Lol, I love thi sfic so much! It's so... real, i guess... and since it's not... how weird does that make me?!~ Lol. Anyhow, loved the story line, and your portrayals of Takumi&co. I really do hope for more... Such as... i dunno... Takumi, Ryousuke and Keisuke doing their "thang"? *winks* Glad to see you didn't want to leave us hanging! Can't wait for more when it does come/they do come. Takumi and Keisuke are real cuties, at least in my opinion! *smirk* And Ryousuke was just fucking hot - arrogant and all.

With great anticipation for more this wonde, wo, wonderful, thing you've got going... *smiles* Love, Mai-chan!

Hey, wat's up? I see you haven't updated the story in a while. Are you going to continue it or was ch.3 the last chapter you were going to write. I recently really got into Initial D, so I'm reading any fics I can find about Initial D, and that's how I found this web site and your story. I read all 3 chapters, and I find the story to be really, really good. I totaly like it, and I really hope you will continue writing it, cuase it's really good.

Loved the story hope you update soon and if you're looking for a beta reader for this story i could give it a try

hope you update soon

Ja ne!

<3 Wonderfull fic ^^! The plot is good, the sex is hot, and the humor is just rotflmao-ish :). Keep up great work!