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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We actually printed this one out and let a million Gravitation fans read it... Most everyone were left in tears... Awesome, awesome story!
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Shuichi dead? An overdose? How did Yuki find out? What is going on? cools beans. keep up the great work.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!!! I DONT GET IT, IT\'S VERY VERY SAD!!! did he die? did shuichi die at the end?!!! PZL PLZ PLZ TELL ME!! I GOTTA KNOW
OH GOD!!! PLZ DON\'T LET HIM DIE!! WRITE A FRIEKING SEQUEL!!!! HE CAN\'T DIE~!!!!!
OH GOD!!! PLZ DON\'T LET HIM DIE!! WRITE A FRIEKING SEQUEL!!!! HE CAN\'T DIE~!!!!!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I know its a lemon, but please write more. I loved it. ^_^*
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is ONE HELL of a great lemon. It sounds like Shuichi\'s narrative- i was believing that was him.It was so sad ded deluded... obviously Yuki\'s the bad lover. You communicated that fact VERY well. And *Teh Sex*.... Oh you go that down PAT. Something I am not very good at, giving the reader just enough, but not making the mistake of giving a detailed description of every single lick. It was perfect. I loved how you talked about this secret life thethree of them were leading. The exposition into Ryuichi\'s personality. I can totally believe he would be that way. it\'s so good, the character analysis. Bravo. This is WONDERFUL stuff. to complain about typos is inane. They are there. But d who who cares?!?!?! i\'ve snored through perfect manuscripts. the point is not whether it\'s perfect, the point is whether it rocks. AND THIS DOES.
My god, you are good!
My god, you are good!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work!!!! Hope more fics are comming!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, very hot. I like the twists and all the characters you threw into bed with Suichi - lot\'s of fun.
Good job!
Good job!
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was different and lovely to read. i really did like it a lot. Especially the way you narrated when Eiri came in and took him away was was very powerful, honestly. I don\'t think you should write a sequel because the reason this works so well and leaves such an impact is precisely the things left unsaid. Lovely work, I can\'t beleive it was your first lemon. It was very good, excellnt work. I wish you all the best and hope you write more!
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God that as beautiful\' and so sad... to mistake along-craved reality for a dream...
Will you continue this, please? Let Shuichi wake up to a dream-come true?
Will you continue this, please? Let Shuichi wake up to a dream-come true?
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was great, and REALLY different! Please make a sequel, I want to know what happens between Yuki and Shu when he finally wakes up! And what happened to Tatsuha and Ryu afterwards? And why was Tohma there, and how did they know where to find Shuichi? So many question!!! So much left unanswered! Sequel!!!