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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK!
I LOVE THE CAT EVN THOUGH I`M THE RAT!
BUT EVEN THE RAT DIDN`T DESERVE THAT!!!!!
EITHER WAY I LOVE THE WHOLE CLIMAX YAMMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THE CAT EVN THOUGH I`M THE RAT!
BUT EVEN THE RAT DIDN`T DESERVE THAT!!!!!
EITHER WAY I LOVE THE WHOLE CLIMAX YAMMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cheese! BRAVO!!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! excellent story, and it HAS a plot. Honestly with all those meaningless stories out there, you can get bored. But this story was a really good one. You have to continue it. It really put their relationship in perspective- Kyo wanting dominance and i can really see this situation. Please continue! Good luck with your writing, This is a great first story.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harsh. That\'s my review in one word. In two, poor Yuki. He must feel really used. [chanting] Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! sequel!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw :( pour yuki... nice fic! i liked all of it except i think kyo should have had more of a revolation at the end. ive read lots of fics were one of them thought the other was only playing a joke or fighting another battle but in the end they all really had the hots for each other and got all nice at the end. im not complaining tho! i just feel sorry for yuki... and for kyo for letting himself do something like that.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. So mean. I love it. *evil fanged draconic grin* Delicious lemon, by the way. Truly wonderful work. You should continue this, it would make a very good fic, not just a oneshot. Simply delightful.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always enjoyed mindless fucking, but not this time, not with this pair.
Despite how i may sound like a sentimental fool, but Yuki has a miserable past and is a bit
too fragile for such rejection, and frankly i dont think Kyo would do that anyways, especially
after such tender lovemaking. It seems like you rewrote that ending at the last moment, but
who am i to psycoanalyze?
nice fic, otherwise
Despite how i may sound like a sentimental fool, but Yuki has a miserable past and is a bit
too fragile for such rejection, and frankly i dont think Kyo would do that anyways, especially
after such tender lovemaking. It seems like you rewrote that ending at the last moment, but
who am i to psycoanalyze?
nice fic, otherwise
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude...thats not cool.
ok...the lemon was hot..really hot...but Kyon-Kyon is so MEAN! ; __ ;
I feel Yuki\'s pain. ::sniff sniff:: ARGH!! its a good fanfic, though......
ok...the lemon was hot..really hot...but Kyon-Kyon is so MEAN! ; __ ;
I feel Yuki\'s pain. ::sniff sniff:: ARGH!! its a good fanfic, though......
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an ending!!! I wasn't expectingwistwist like that, to be sure! Very creative, though -- keep up the good work!!!