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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure I'm satisfied with that ending. I'm thinking we need some more ;) It was good, yes.
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.. just not the ending so much :\ that was a little too mean for Kyo
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* I can't help but feel a bit sorry for Yuki and I want to see where this story is headed so it would be great if continued! Please...please...?...*sniffle*
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This left me feeling slightly ill - NOT because it was bad, but because it was Disturbing. Kyo was so heartless at the end, after he & Yuki had been so intimate... You gave hints of it in the beginning, and I could really feel it growing in him when he starts to take Yuki, but it isn\'t until he says those two harsh words - \"Get out\" - that I really started to comprehend what was going on... Poor Yuki. I hope you continue this fic, because I\'m in love with it - not many fics leave me sickened with grief, but yours did. My compliments.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please, please, please write more! that was sooo incredibly awesome that i can\'t believe it was your first lemon! you write beautifully and i love your destiontions of, well, everything. you can\'t just leave it there! you have to write more! well, you don\'t have to, but it\'d be nice. ^_~
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continuation! (sits waiting expectantly)
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehhehe....
hehehhehehehehehheheheheh....
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! *falls over laughing*
There\'s just something so wonderfully satisfying about seeing Yuki get so thuroughly fucked over in more ways then one.
hehehhehehehehehheheheheh....
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! *falls over laughing*
There\'s just something so wonderfully satisfying about seeing Yuki get so thuroughly fucked over in more ways then one.
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwww.... poor poor yuki, i luv luv kyo-kun as well, but he was a friggen A-hole in this one!!! GURG!!! anywho, nice story, luv luved it! ^_^ keep writing, just next time don\'t mako suo such an ass... (wateva, it\'s your stories) ::sobs hugging yuki:: poor yuki-kun!!!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eiii! That was great for a first time, but please continue it! Poor Yuki, I can\'t even imagine how he must have felt there. I understand Kyo\'s thoughtline, but that was cruel, even for him. He should come to realize that he does actually have feeling for Yuki, and in an attempt to say he was sorry, he should let Yuki be the Seme... -wink wink, nudge nudge-
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh.. this is great.
left me hanging, but still great.
i hope, and i believe that i am not alone in this,
that you will do continue this.. =)
good job. ;p
left me hanging, but still great.
i hope, and i believe that i am not alone in this,
that you will do continue this.. =)
good job. ;p