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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOOD! CONTINUE! Or Cherry Kills *brandishes knife;; C;;
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am grateful to have read a KyoYuki fic that connects their fighting to their love making. It was very well done and I have no compliants with the spelling or grammer. The story itself wasid, id, deep, and psychologically compelling. Their relationship is very complex and I am glad you wrote it with this in mind. I hope you\'ll write some more. I\'d love to read it.
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was so sad! i\'m not real fan fan of yaoi, more of the original couples... like yukiru or kyoru stories, but i tried this... it was okay so far, but i\'m one for love and romance and sappiness... and that was sad. it was a great story, but the ending made me want to say \"omg.\" and cry. yuki in this story is like a girl. and when a girl duz do it, she wants attention, not to be treated like some whore and just be forced to leave. i know this is your story and i cannot change anything about it, but please don\'t make the endings so sad! or make a sequel or another chapter where kyou apologizes and they go at it or something! poor yuki...
well, keep writing! you\'ve got great talent... but don\'t hurt my yuki! WAI! I\'ll protect him! *goes and coddles Yuki* \"I\'m not letting go! NEVER NEVER! He\'s mine!\"
-youngloveisdivine
well, keep writing! you\'ve got great talent... but don\'t hurt my yuki! WAI! I\'ll protect him! *goes and coddles Yuki* \"I\'m not letting go! NEVER NEVER! He\'s mine!\"
-youngloveisdivine
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wa~~~i I agree with the others....you should definately continue this.
I love this pairing....-sniffles- I felt sooo sorry for Yuki at the end....-grins-
Keep up the good work, ne??? MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
^____^
ja ne
I love this pairing....-sniffles- I felt sooo sorry for Yuki at the end....-grins-
Keep up the good work, ne??? MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
^____^
ja ne
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cruel! HEHEHE, I loved it, take that Yuki. (I can\'t stand the pretty boys)
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not a fan of yaoi...only like 20%, but this story was really good! ^_^ Good for a first fanfition! \'Didn\'t like the ending too well, though...=/ It should have been Yuki saying, \"Stupid Cat.\", and Kyo replying with a chuckle saying, \"Damn Rat.\". Lol! Hehe. xD
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOUR FIRST LEMON?! Oh my..That was amazing! I loved the story, and I cried at the end! Poor Yuki...I think you should continue this.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD that was HOT! *drools* MORE!!!!!!