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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginning. And I say that because you\'ve got to write some more to this story. First off we need a nice well written hot love scene for Sanzo & Goku. For a plot I suppose you could write in some stuff about how not all modern demons adjusted well to modern society and have our Saiyuki guys fight them yada, yada, etc. There\'s lots of possibilities, with the Saiyuki guys in our time. Great story, please continue it. You\'re doing great.