rate_review Reviews

Very nice and touching story. That Hector got a good kick in his ass from Shun!!! I particularly like his witty mood, but...If yake ake Shun die, I'll make sure Santa won't bring you anything!

Oh my gosh i love this fanfic so much! Wonderful job with it and I can\'t wait for chapter 7 (can i ever wait for ANY of the updates? lol)

Ikki was hella OOC, but that\'s only if you\'re going with Mr. Hard core dedicated fighter. But you\'re writting in that some changes had come in his life lightening him up so in that sence he\'s not OOC. Well done, it was fun.

i really liked this it was the first ever shun and hyoga lemon i have ver read and it was wonderful. keep up the great work and update soon. well then cheers!^_^

Yay! Very nice chapter! Can\'t wait to hear what happens in ch 6 lolz sounds funny! well, update soon, kay?

~Peace, Love, and Donuts

I never thought I would be ever saying this but.... Go Saori Go! You go girl, save Shun.

As for the chapter, it was nice. I liked the interaction between the characters and the teasing parts with Ikki. I\'m glad you made it so well, can\'t wait for the next chapter.

HAHA~! I can finally review! Darn adultFF.net was giving me a lot of troubles recently. Anyhow, very nice as usual. Still confuses me how you managed to make them 40 some odd in the present day when they would be in their 30\'s. But that\'s a mut point. The idea of Saori with Shiryu scarred me horribly, then again I hate Saori with a passion (then again I\'ve only seen up to volume 6 and the Hades chapter and so far she\'s been on hard core bitch). And I\'m sure you know this but the way you are spelling \'blonde\' is for girls. You want \'blond\' for men. I know it\'s weird but how it goes.

Awwwwwww it is so rare to find a fic on this site with a real plot! I love this fic so much!! I have read it nearly three times through already and I can\'t wait for more! You really gave Hyoga and Shun wonderful voice, and their relationship in the present was so sweet! ^__^ I nearly cried.. nearly.. hehe..
I hope it all ends out well for Hyoga and Shun! ^__^
I\'ll be checking in on this fic, most definitely!

*harbors an extreme hatred towards Saori* Ooo yeah, she gets to join in the next ter.ter....

Anyway, so far so good right? Nicely written and it\'s going at a nice pace. Keep up the good work.

YES! I\'m one of the first to review! I tried to review earlier but the thing wouldn\'t work. Anyway, so far it\'s very well written. I wounder what their adopted child looks like, and what gender he/she is. Can\'t wait for the next chapter to come out.