rate_review Reviews

Clean and pleasant writing style, the tone fits Hyoga well, because it\'s full of feeling but in a dignified, non-sugary way. It\'s sad so far, but I hope it will get better... I mean, you can\'t have the power to kill off Shun, even Hades couldn\'t do it!! ^^; Ehm, sorry, my insanity gets the better of me at times. What can I add? Good story, looking forward to 3rd chapter!

(this didn\'t go through the first time I tried to review)
Aw...*sniffs* what an angsty start! This is great so far, can\'t wait for more!
JJ