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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was Yay! Nice job!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello! So I was going to wait until I read everything to review, but I can't help this: " "Does this mean…" Ayame's face broke out into a stupid grin, "that Ha-kun really is a cowboy?" " ---> this line just about killed me! It's the stupidest and funniest thing that Aya-chan ever said!!! My goodness he's SO IC on this!!
Well, let me say that your fic is one of the best that I have read (specially because it's HaruxKyou) in this fandom!! I love how you portray they and how much you can really understand what the characters are thinking/doing/etc, cuz you really got they right (IMO)!!! This fic deserves a SS+++!! It's funny, hot, sexy, angst, fluff, IC and just absolutely MARVELOUS!! I *heart* it!!
*Can't wait to finish this one and go to sequel*
Chise/Lin
PS.: I REALLY want to kill Akito right now, gosh, he can get under my skin like almost anyone else can't!! *"DIE, BITCH DIE!!!! shoots Akito until only a bloody mud is left*
PPS: HUAHUAHUAHUA, Yuki *loves* KyonKyon!! Go suffer and die too, you useless rat!!
PPPS: *swear it's the last one* I also wanna kill Kagura, she's so selfish! Oh And Rin too, bitch leaves Haru and now acts all righteous and what not!
Now, to say my last words: I wanna more smut :P
oh, And YOU ROCK
Well, let me say that your fic is one of the best that I have read (specially because it's HaruxKyou) in this fandom!! I love how you portray they and how much you can really understand what the characters are thinking/doing/etc, cuz you really got they right (IMO)!!! This fic deserves a SS+++!! It's funny, hot, sexy, angst, fluff, IC and just absolutely MARVELOUS!! I *heart* it!!
*Can't wait to finish this one and go to sequel*
Chise/Lin
PS.: I REALLY want to kill Akito right now, gosh, he can get under my skin like almost anyone else can't!! *"DIE, BITCH DIE!!!! shoots Akito until only a bloody mud is left*
PPS: HUAHUAHUAHUA, Yuki *loves* KyonKyon!! Go suffer and die too, you useless rat!!
PPPS: *swear it's the last one* I also wanna kill Kagura, she's so selfish! Oh And Rin too, bitch leaves Haru and now acts all righteous and what not!
Now, to say my last words: I wanna more smut :P
oh, And YOU ROCK
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the best Furuba fic on this site! However, Gaiden 3+4 didn\'t sit well with me. Never did like tongue piercings. I don\'t know why you would want to get stabbed through the tongue and have it stuck with a metal ball that hinders eating, and moving your tongue. Also, it risks your chance of infection drastically, as its in your MOUTH, full of bacteria. Also, it looks gross and eating must be a hassle. Nipple rings aren\'t really in my favor either.
However, great fic! I love it SSSSOOOOOO much! ^_^
However, great fic! I love it SSSSOOOOOO much! ^_^
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this is my favorite.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-crys- i wuv u! u put my favoritsist characters togeather,i wuv u i wuv u i wuv u! -snuggles the writer-U SHOULD BE PUBLISHED!-is gonna read the sequal- i love how u can combine angst,confessions,and ect ect all togeather,and syill make it really good! the smutttttttttttttttttttt -does her smut dance->> u made me come up with a smut dance for this Fic.
see u soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
shuichi
see u soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
shuichi
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I can\'t believe I forgot to do a full review until now!
ANYway...
It\'s a very well written story. It could use a little polishing up here and there, but its nothing that would make anyone go \"ugh, I give up, I\'m not reading this anymore\" (which I have said many times about many Fruits Basket fics I\'ve tried to read). I find the whole thing just seems to jump out at me... though having (finally) watched the entier series, I will agree that there is some slight OOC ness.
But, no matter what anyone says, there is nothing wrong with characters in a Fan Fiction being slightly out of character. If done write, it only adds to the story, as it did here. I truely adore your work, and am looking forward to more of it, hopefully very soon.
ANYway...
It\'s a very well written story. It could use a little polishing up here and there, but its nothing that would make anyone go \"ugh, I give up, I\'m not reading this anymore\" (which I have said many times about many Fruits Basket fics I\'ve tried to read). I find the whole thing just seems to jump out at me... though having (finally) watched the entier series, I will agree that there is some slight OOC ness.
But, no matter what anyone says, there is nothing wrong with characters in a Fan Fiction being slightly out of character. If done write, it only adds to the story, as it did here. I truely adore your work, and am looking forward to more of it, hopefully very soon.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t reviewed yet, that I remember, so...
HaruKyo is my Furuba OTP now. Thank you. (Thank you also for the Jewel song, was it alright that I got it? It was lovely. I didn\'t get a ce tce to catch Dante\'s Prayer though)
This was such a wonderful story, beautifully written. It was witty and funny and sweet. So great.
There\'s a sequel floating about, no?
lovelove,
mi
HaruKyo is my Furuba OTP now. Thank you. (Thank you also for the Jewel song, was it alright that I got it? It was lovely. I didn\'t get a ce tce to catch Dante\'s Prayer though)
This was such a wonderful story, beautifully written. It was witty and funny and sweet. So great.
There\'s a sequel floating about, no?
lovelove,
mi
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, I want to say I know I should have read this before I read the sequa;, but I am a lazy person.
Normally, I would wait to review the story until I finish, but I had to say this now.
I am SO glad you threw in the AoD referance, and it pleases me that I am not the only person in the universe that likes the S-Mart Ending, though I do wish they\'d have the extended Windmill scene in the regular showing of the movie. Makes more sense when you see how the oatmeal got on the floor, IMHO.
Normally, I would wait to review the story until I finish, but I had to say this now.
I am SO glad you threw in the AoD referance, and it pleases me that I am not the only person in the universe that likes the S-Mart Ending, though I do wish they\'d have the extended Windmill scene in the regular showing of the movie. Makes more sense when you see how the oatmeal got on the floor, IMHO.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic....RRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is all I have to say...^__^
That is all I have to say...^__^
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is an awesome story! I\'m glad I could find it so quickly after the dissappointment of fanfiction.net!!! =^.^= Write more please please! This story rocks!