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for True path

by hentaipie

person rothos1
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story and nice cliffhanger, Although I thought that Shampoo or Cologne would get involved. Keep writing Bravo!!
person S.M.
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for more
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm, Interesting slow start indeed, I wait to see Uky Ukyo is planning , I know it has been 5 years later and stuff, but Remember Akane is VERY jelous and stuff , so her dramatic change indeed so far is somewhat interesting, ranma\'s too he would never hurt a freind\'s feelings so how this plays out, is somewhat up in the air, and there is still the Ryouga situation to deal with !
person oldwolf
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
2nd chapter wasn\'t too bad. The story has potential. So long as the story-line is too transparent, it should be excellent.
person hentiafluffy
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was pretty good but you need to update ok :D

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