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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a great story, it's probably one of the best furuba fanfics i've ever read, i'm not kidding. please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmhmm....Well, there was more to the story there. Good job! ~lol~ Please keep going, it just gets more interesting! I like AkiRu one's b/c I am sick, but any Tohru pairing is fine...Well, toodles...Please update soon and lemme know!
FoxyOrange
FoxyOrange
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this is so good. Never read anything like this before ^^ I really hope you keep going. But I was wondering something, where was Kyo and Shigure during all this? Anywayz, please continue ^__^
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
*rubs hands together* Yuki is the sad little thing isn\'t he?
I wasn\'t sure about the Akito/Tohru pairing, but I see it\'s going to be very interesting.
Poor, poor Yuki.
Please keep writing.
*rubs hands together* Yuki is the sad little thing isn\'t he?
I wasn\'t sure about the Akito/Tohru pairing, but I see it\'s going to be very interesting.
Poor, poor Yuki.
Please keep writing.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginnings to a grim and dark tale. I love fluff as much as the next guy (Yuki/Tohru and Kyou/Tohru) but I\'m so looking forward to reading more of the dark side of Akito... I find him utterly and deniably twisted and can\'t wait to see what you come up with. Writing an Akito/Tohru story cannot be easy, seeing how they are as opposite on the personality scale as black and white are in the color spectrum *nodnod* but I have faith that you can do it and make us all want more. Update soon!
~*~ Vic-chan ~*~
~*~ Vic-chan ~*~
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Nice start. Very twisted. Keep up the good work.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good, i hope to read more. I wonder what would happen the next time yuki got a more intamite and sucluded time with tohru... heh heh... XP anywho, keep up the good work, though the last chapter was extremely too short... i was like \"WHAT?!\" when i scrolled down to suddenly find the ending so soon... well i suppose that\'s a good thing. keep it up! but next time it would be a little nicer for you to make your chapter longer... ::givesce sce sign::
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June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I luv the start of it! Please continue! ~lol~ I like the idea of Akito \"taking an interest\". Hehe, sounds dark. I luv it. Please continue!!!!!! ^________^
<3 - FoxyOrange
<3 - FoxyOrange
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and write more! can\'t leave people hanging like that!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for more!
I am a HUGE fan of the original, scary fairy tales, and of course a huge furuba fanatic.
And so far, I\'m quite impressed with your writing. Please submit more, and I\'ll continue to review - I may even have something helpful to add - I\'ll try at least.
I am a HUGE fan of the original, scary fairy tales, and of course a huge furuba fanatic.
And so far, I\'m quite impressed with your writing. Please submit more, and I\'ll continue to review - I may even have something helpful to add - I\'ll try at least.