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I like this! I like how Xellos is drawn to Lina even though he\'s not capable of love... well, maybe he can feel something, like affection? I don\'t know. But I really like the first and second chapters, they\'re very sensual. Past and present tense get mixed up in your writing, but the imagery is so good I don\'t mind that much. I hope you write more Xellos/Lina scenes like that second chapter. Levitation sex is good! ^_~

i cant believe you stoped there just when it starts to build up you stop befor it gets juicy. Also Xelos is being awfly sweet to lina (minus the hole and the power sealing that is) by sweet i mean using his cape to clean her of i think what he feels for her is more than just lust and desire if it was just lust he might of just used an aphrodisiac instead of traping her there