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person Saakisu
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing x_x it\'s written so well and i really enjoyed reading it. Thanks ^_^ that made my day XD I hope you keep up the good stuff.
person RedHedLvr
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best written, HOTTEST fic I\'ve read in a long time. WOW. I mean, I\'m typing in CAPS here so you just have to know its GREAT! Woof! *fans self furiously* I liked the rather old-fashioned style intro to each chapter cause they were witty and funny and I just loved the whole thing.

Hope you write more for these two soon. There just aren\'t enough stories out there for these guys and you really have them down to a T.

Thanks for a fantastic fic.
person Nakuo Shiatsu
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I loved it... Write another one... Please...?
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just... wow. Very nice. I applaud your skills. Your imagery is magnificent and your characterization lovely. I think the Eclipse in the bath scene has to be one of my most favorite things that I\'ve ever read. This story gets better every time I read it, especially now that you\'ve fixed it up. Thanks for sharing. =]
person tsuki
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i.... ....... ......i..... .....i.... cant believe you would think of such a thing.....i cant believe you didnt continue it.....its maskes me sad.. i want more....0.0 please?
person Lilly
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. 0_0..... *Blinks a bit*

Your writing style is so clever and intelligent! I loved it! It was a lot of fun to read! ^_^
(And by clever and intelligent I mean OMG that was flippin\' HAWT! I want to steal your noggin and burrow inside it like a little Yaoi obsessed squirrel.)

Cuz... that\'s not crazy or anything. lol.

-Lilly
person Starwarrior
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude.... that was deep lol! That\'s all I can say. It was deep
person Leah
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was SO freaking hot. TT^TT Wow.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was a little iffy, but this was overall a great series! Well done!

Perhaps a bit of editing to fix typos and programming errors (saw a lot of unfinished hypertext drifting between words), or maybe that\'s just this site? :)

Once again, very well done. Quite possibly the longest drawn-out lemon I\'ve read.

^__^
person Lee
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaowzah! Steamy! I read your bio, and definitly suggest the submission of something original. Good Luck.

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