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Ok are you ever going to update this story?

I really liked the story, man Keitaro sure is a lucky man.

Why The fuck have you not update this great story!

Wow!!! The drama, the love-triangles squared, the everyting, especially the sex!!! Damn, I always thought that Keitaro was better off with Motoko. I don't know why, it just seemed that these two, despite how their relationship began when the manga first started, it just felt right. Too bad it didn't end that way in manga, or the anime, but in your little fanfic world, it has and I'm glad I discovered and read it. I do hope you'll continue with this because it is a very well written and intriguing story, and I'd love to read more. Will this be just a Keitaro/Motoko fic, or will it be a Keitaro/Harem fic, I wonder? However, if it does turn out that way, then allow Motoko to be his #1, because shde deserves it, or at the very least let it be just those two together.

I enojy the plot alot. and even tho there a good bit of lemony scenes it has a classy feel to it and very enjoyable to read :) looking forward to the next to update!

You know. You could Give Shinobu some "LOVE" time with keitaro too you know, instead of giving her that small part in Chapter 6. How about huh? Please.

Best ever

Best ever

heh...hehehe...he...

You've taken the Naru bashing a bit far by having Kanako violently attack her while she's in bed. The playful mishaps/antics that Akamatsu described (Naru Punching an immortal keitaro to hide the fact that she likes him) haved been changed into something a lot more disturbing and deranged. The rest of the hinata crew (especially Keitaro) would forcibly remove Kanako after doing something that violent and criminal.
Maybe its time for a little therapy.