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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Everyone is in character, and the the fact that getting to the lemon (part 6) was done over a period of time and not rushed into (as many are) speaks well of your abilities. The lemon was very tasteful, and had real feeling there.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An ammendment to review. May bad with a typo. part 5 and not part 6.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whos Next out of the tenants and what about Sus and motokos sister
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was worried there for a second, but not blood siblings is a small relief. i can just see Shinobu running off crying if she were to see this
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God-damn! What an intense sex scene! please write more!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just beutiful * teaes start to fall *
Just loved this story, hiley recomended, you could feel the emotion and puts you and drags you into the story and you just wan\'t more.
Just loved this story, hiley recomended, you could feel the emotion and puts you and drags you into the story and you just wan\'t more.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story diffently a fav
hope u update soon would like to see how the others adapt to them becoming a couple
hope u update soon would like to see how the others adapt to them becoming a couple
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible piece of work... I\'m a dork who tries to understand things beyond the face value of things and such... And this is just an amazing pice of literature. I\'m a big fan of Love Hina, both in the original manga/anime form and fanfic forms. And this is one of the best I have read, you should be incredibly proud of this, can\'t wait to read the rest. Good luck and great job ~_^
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... amazing! I absolutely loved it. It\'s so sweet and hot. You\'re very good at this. And, I love the pairing.