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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naru's a bitch oh and it was sarah su tama-chan and keitaro not shinobu besides that i like this story.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More chapters soon, please. Always nice to see Keitaro/Motoko stories...good ones even nicer. And Lemons? Kick ass. :)
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! FINISH IT! I hate you. -.-;; Leaving me in suspense, you evil, evil person.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was definetly hot, i really prefer love stories like these with really good lemons.=). but overall , it was awesome. whens the next one coming out?
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY YOU SHOULD UPDATE
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey now, don\'t worry about writing full-blown lemons. They\'re just as good as any other type of writing, it all depends on the author, and with the way you\'ve been writing this one, I\'d ave to say you\'re doing very well, and if you make it a lemon, it will only be better.
ciao
ciao
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i like the story so far and ill have to agree with you that you might have to go into a full blown lemon at this rate but nonetheless its still a really good story keep up the good work and update soon please
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that is great
motoko and kei are the best hina pairing!
but still your Story is quite screwed up.
Hell how will they get out of that?
motoko and kei are the best hina pairing!
but still your Story is quite screwed up.
Hell how will they get out of that?
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, never liked Naru. Reminds me too much of Akane from Ranma 1/2,
and some girls I know personally i.e. runs hot and cold all the time, really bitchy. Keep up the good writing. I wouldn\'t mind seeing a storyr with Kietaro, and Kitsune, although I agree that Motoko is probably the best girl for him from the series.
and some girls I know personally i.e. runs hot and cold all the time, really bitchy. Keep up the good writing. I wouldn\'t mind seeing a storyr with Kietaro, and Kitsune, although I agree that Motoko is probably the best girl for him from the series.