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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice dude. I love it when Shinobu has her moment because it's taboo to most authors and they don't want to touch that subject. You really had the pedophile's psychology down very well. Though it did turn more into a love story at the end and I admire that. I would love to see more chapters.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I were 13 again this would\'ve made me horny... I guess I\'m 13 again after all because it does! Excellent job! I just wish the coding was fixed...
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz continue
want more
want more
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ps can you plz fix the leters its kinda messed with ero sighns and like acents on letters a litle hard to interpert but it was good
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There seems to be a formatting error somewhere. Quotation marks are replaced with stuff like “.
Though as far as the story itself goes its good for a PWP lemom. One of the better ones.
Though as far as the story itself goes its good for a PWP lemom. One of the better ones.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, want another chapter up soon
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Very good here a exelent story here, never know wht might hapen next, will he do the other grils as well or what? don\'t know but whatever comes next it will be exelent
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, you should have them have sex in the hot spring, lots of fun in the water. also dont make her pregent!! OVER SELL!! its so old to make the girl pregent after one time.