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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved
the writting is abit screwed up but it was very entertaining! ^^
the writting is abit screwed up but it was very entertaining! ^^
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, it\'s Sempai, not senpai. Second, the formatting is kinda messed up, try to fix that. Other than that, the romance note was nice...
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it ! Write another chapter!
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is inconcievble, despictable, and just plain wrong. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!