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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH...MY...FUCKING....GOSH! THAT WAS SO GOOD! AWSOME! OMG...*dies* i wanna watch that tape! I swear, that turned me on more than ANYTHING else! I didnt even notice, but my hand was wandering to places that they should NOT go to with my lil sis in the room! wow...that was so great! i sooo look forward to read more of your fics!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT HOT HOT! And then, WHAM! That ending! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Fucking hilarious!!!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you the same person as \'Saiyana\' over at Mediaminer? This story is up at MM under that writer name, and I was wondering if you\'re being plagiarized.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very well written story. I loved the ending :).
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD, that was GREAT!!! And the ending was funny! I hope to read more of your Gravi-stories!
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Yum. Yeah, I can\'t think of much else to say right now. That was awesome. ~_~
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cools beans. I loved it. Especially the last line. That was great.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell that was hot!! Damn Sexy! I love the reenacting of thier first time together. I dont normally like Shu on top, but this one worked. Awesome writing! LOL I laughed like hell at the end. ^_^
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah! That was like, four lemons for the price of one! Awesome! ^-^ The ending was also quite amusing. Write more, \'kay? ;D
+---Rebecca---+
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was so good. I found it from reading The Nudist which I thought was very cute also. You\'re stories have a good flow to them. I hope that made sense ^.^ Hope to see more from you.