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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods!! This is the BEST yaoi story I\'ve ever read in my whole life!!!!i liked that Shuichi was on top too...Heh heh... and the little dance was really sexy too. ^o^ YOU ROCK!!!!!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I know I\'m being terribly redundant, but wow.
I\'m speechless.
Quite possibly the best piece I\'ve read, do writee lee lest you be bludgened with a stick.
A big one.
I\'m speechless.
Quite possibly the best piece I\'ve read, do writee lee lest you be bludgened with a stick.
A big one.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg i loved it so much. i have never reviewed anything before and i have read a lot of these on here. this was so awsome i was like about to shoot myself it was so good. ok im done now
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe cutecute ^-^
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! But for some reason I think it was somehow...um...incomplete..Idk..maybe it was just my computer that didnt really uploade the full page or something......it\'s been doing that alot lately.. ^_^;
Anyways, this story was awesome and I really hope to read more like this from you. ^_^
Anyways, this story was awesome and I really hope to read more like this from you. ^_^
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo....YAY!! My computer finally let me see the entire story!! Wow...the story was REALLY good =3 . I think it was great the way you even based it on the manga. Nothing more to say except.....AWESOME!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. Some of the best written sex I\'ve ever seen, very hot and well written! Excellent job finding the balance between sexy and crass. You get brownie points for baseing it on the manga as well. I adore your Shuichi, and I usually can\'t stand him in fanfic. Congrats for getting rid of blushing, stumbling virgin whiney fanfic Shu. Plus he was seme, and I love UKEYuki. ;) I don\'t have a complaint in the world, other than you only have one fic and would love to read more by you. Great job.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very nice... i love gravi lemons... this was a really good one... i like how it did all the references to their first time(s)... that was cool... i liked how it ended too... I WANT A COPY OF THAT VIDEO TAPE!!!!!!! *sigh* yes, that was a hot fuck session that will live on in my mind for a while... and make me orgasm i\'m sure. thankx for the fun stuff... you\'re a good writer too, don\'t think i\'m JUST a sex addict... i appreciate a well-written lemon and this was one. YAY!!! (sorry i blab so much) ^^ ~riley c.~
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! loved this fic! it was sexy, funny, descriptive without being lewd and crass. wonderful job!
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, sexy!