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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its wrong and evil but I think the plot is good, you should definitely continue to a chapter 3.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would be a federal crime not to continue this fic its great you should definitely add much more to this story
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome sex!!!!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u should really take this fic even further it was great and look how many positive reviews u got for it
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So where's chapter 3?
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best pokemon stories i'v ever read pleas continue.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great 2nd chapter. I have to say that this is one of my favorite lemons. Any chance of you working on another chapter covering Ash's dream and the need for Delilah to buy a costume?
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still one of my favorite hentai stories after reading it two years ago. I loved chapter two and it'd be awesome if this were continued. 5/5
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This wasn't bad.I give you an
A+ in originality
A for character sync
A for lenght
B for writen
and a B- for spelling.
But all in all this was prity nice.Thank you.
A+ in originality
A for character sync
A for lenght
B for writen
and a B- for spelling.
But all in all this was prity nice.Thank you.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Needless to say, this story is great. The writing style is unique and the theme, although morally taboo, you turned into something dare I say...beautiful. Well done.