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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic and well written, especially for a Pokemon fic. Excellent work.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT THIS IS THE SHIT GODAMN DUDE WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS SOO AWESOME PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! cool.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this is fucking nice. I got hard over this. Next chapter Ash comes home and fucks his mom in the shower! Now that would be hot!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was seriously wrong, but so well written - hey, if there\'s a motto for this fic it\'s - if it feels good, DO IT! Never mind the fact that if you want a good fuck there are plenty of women who aren\'t your mother, and the thought that someone would shove their cock where they came out of is mind bogglingly desgusting. Oh well, it\'s naughty as hell - and the naughtiness makes it forbiddenly fun and raunchy. Good writing. Bad visual.
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
surpringly well writtin, a sickening story in its morals, but i cant argue with an artist. very good and worthy of a good review
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Next Chapter you should Put And His Mom showering together and They Have Sex.
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude that was a fucking great story i love the way u write man it is totally awesome and i must say it was in need of an epoligue in my opinion but other than that completely awesome and very well written just one thing dude if ur gonna write about anal sex just make sure u include the very necessary stretching with lube that comes with it.k? sweet looking forward to seeing more man great fic
the le of of the anarchist faction,
Xero
the le of of the anarchist faction,
Xero
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O DAMN! This story is great in my books!