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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping there was more to Sousuke and Kaname's coupling~
And hmmm~
I think I'd prefer Kurz to be the one spying/eavesdropping on them~
Because U think it's funnier that way~
And hmmm~
I think I'd prefer Kurz to be the one spying/eavesdropping on them~
Because U think it's funnier that way~
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really do love everything that you write. I love this line 'He'd always thought her to be the perfect blend of killer body and killer soldier, a combination that turned him on like nothing else.' and the line where he didn't think he'd be kissing her ass for real was soooo sexy.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was very much fun to read, and I loved the 4th chapter. So nice to see some of the peanut gallery getting some luving too.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How much fun is this!? Please I hope you continue soon!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! That was great! Sousuke and Kaname were great, but Mao and Weber were awesome... very sexy!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very, very hot! wow!!! poor Sousuke, having to deal with Chidori's pranks. LOL. well...i'm sure it was worth it in the end. very well written, loved the addition of mel and Kurtz (i love Kurtz). great take on Sousuke's innocence as well. very, very well done!!!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that was a hot fic! kudos! i love kaname and sousuke! great mao and kurz add on too!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story was the hottness!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG i love this story, not to mention ure writing is fantastic!!!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was hot.
Mmm.
Being bisexual, I love both of them. Yummy.
I'm not generally too fond of the Melissa/Kurz pairing, either, but you did a great job with that. Again, yummy. ^_^
However... I don't know if it's just my browser, but there are a few areas (mostly in chapter three) where the text gets kind of jumbled together. It's strange. I think you should take a look at it, because it's kind of a mood killer--even if it's not meant to be there.
Another thing I want to say: You did a great job at portraying Kaname, and obviously she'd be the agressor/initiator of it. But she's not a whore. I'd like to think she hasn't lost her virginity yet. Though she is an agressive character, in the end she's still a pure and innocent hero, right along with Sousuke.
Plus, she's still what--sixteen? That's not impossible.
But it's better than I would have done. Great job! ^_^
Mmm.
Being bisexual, I love both of them. Yummy.
I'm not generally too fond of the Melissa/Kurz pairing, either, but you did a great job with that. Again, yummy. ^_^
However... I don't know if it's just my browser, but there are a few areas (mostly in chapter three) where the text gets kind of jumbled together. It's strange. I think you should take a look at it, because it's kind of a mood killer--even if it's not meant to be there.
Another thing I want to say: You did a great job at portraying Kaname, and obviously she'd be the agressor/initiator of it. But she's not a whore. I'd like to think she hasn't lost her virginity yet. Though she is an agressive character, in the end she's still a pure and innocent hero, right along with Sousuke.
Plus, she's still what--sixteen? That's not impossible.
But it's better than I would have done. Great job! ^_^