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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was pretty good! Sosuke is soo cute! But i loved it when Mel was like he should have known better lol. That was great. And the addition of Kurtz and Mel was awsome! You should definitly do an interigation scean. That would be awsome! Much love to you for this story and indeed cookies!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
give more kurtz plus melissa! hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex !!!! kurtz plus mellsia!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was too awesome for words. The lack of Kaname/Sousuke fics on this site is appalling, and this hit the spot. I loved how Kaname was treating Sousuke! But TMelissa and Kurz' situation was the best. IT was totally erotic. I loved it.
Good work!
Truth
Good work!
Truth
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One minor critique: Mao is a Sergent Major, not a full Major. There is a difference!
Other than that, the story was just fine.
Other than that, the story was just fine.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved.it. Both couples were SO sexy. great job!!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'m so happy that my first fan fic for Full Metal Panic didn\'t disappoint me. Good Job!^^
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good, I liked all 4 chapters.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 thumbs up. I liked it alot. It\'s awsome that some one will finall let sosuke know he wants kaname. You rule.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TYhis is the hottest story I ever read please write more. Can\'t wait. Also Anon can\'t you be more critizizy you should marry simone frome american idol!!! Love the storry. Add a chapter with tessa, kaname and sosuke. That\'s hot
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! The best Sousuke and Kaname lemon i\'ve ever read. Well, it\'s the only one i\'ve ever read... Ithink you should write more. Sousuke and Kaname please!