rate_review Reviews

oh so hot. I love this pairing!

update soon, i say!!! good story! ;)

Hi nice story you got there. keep it on!

wow! i was going to write a "defloration" lemon between those two, but then i found yours and it was like someone had already read my mind! i love the series too, and this was DEFINITELY the way i'd picture a love scene between kaname and sousuke. (sousuke's so cute!) anyway, hats off to your ability to keep them in character---that's what makes a lemon stand out. i wouldn't have thought to include the twist at the end and the surprise lemon between kurz and mao, but i thoroughly enjoyed it, and now i'm dying to know what sort of situation you said one of your readers suggested.

If you know af an intresting situation do it! this is a good story!

Nice lemon! Particularly the Sousuke torture. Also glad to see Melissa and Kurtz get some. Thanks!

ALL RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful, i liked it, and personally i think that was very in character for all of the to tell you the truth. Would love to see what your twisted lil mind can bring up next ^.~

Hey Anon, thanks for your comments--I really appreciate them! Obviously I'm not as well-informed of these details as you! It's always good to learn :)

M/K! Thank you!
Initial response: ROFL! Nice! :D
Just some things I wanna mention:
There're some inconsistencies with the names--Kurz usually calls her 'Sis,' not by her first name, and calling her 'Major' would be inappropriate, as her rank is really a sergeant. I think they usually put the adjective after the noun in military rankings, eg 'Sergeant 1st Class.'
They were mostly in character, which I liked a lot. XD Nearly the entire chapter was funny! XD Judging from everything, I'd say you're a very good writer. Thanks for the M/K lemon! ^o^