rate_review Reviews

WHOOOOO!!!! THAT was great...^^juuuuuust exellent..I just LOVE Kurz!! so damn hot...anyways...cant wait for that next chappie!! ^^

Wow! I was worried that there was only one Sousuke x Chidori fanfic for the Full Metal Panic section, but after reading that, I was pleasantly surprised! Obviously in this series (especially with Sousuke\'s complete lack of primal instinct) you really had to do a bit of character stretching to get them into bed. Which, unfortunately, puts Chidori in the position of being the aggressor. While I don\'t see her going this far to get with him (because she\'s in denial as well), her personality makes her the more obvious candidate for making the first move. We all know that Ske\'ke\'s the last person who\'d ever act on a sexual impulse (if it ever even comes to his mind at all). However, I can totally forgive it because of the way you set it up and followed through. You still maintained quite a bit of their personas and didn\'t sacrifice the wonderful plethora of jokes and devilish schemes. I totally appreciate the very end when Melissa wants to scout out Kurz due to eavesdropping. That was classic! I gave this fanfic 5 stars because it was good, you maintained character persona to the best of your ability given the situation, and you did a wonderful job communicating the story (aka, spelling, grammar, and utilizing a diverse vocabulary without raping the thesaurus in the process). Awesome job!

Great story. You write really well! I\'d like to see a Kurz/Melissa. Please? ^-^

It was really good one of the best Lemon stories I\'ve ever read

Ond, nd, Umm, By the way, I would love to see a Melissa and Kurz Lemon

^-^ I really liked this fic. It was about time somebody wrote a FMP fic on this site. I liked it, please keep writing I would like to see some more of your ideas.

I wouldn\'t mind a Sousuke/Tessa chapter instead of the Melissa/Kurz one ;D

OOO THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PUT ANOTHER S/K

This is great! Are you going to updaton? on? Because i can\'t wait!

Just one word: Awesome, i truly want to read more and soon i hope!

I love it, man, this is the first FMP fic i\'ve ever read and i love it! You\'re just so good, i love your fics! I haven\'t read them all yet but i wiventventually.