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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed your storie so far, you\'ve kept the chacters pretty in character and I couyld see Kaname as the aggresor in this sort of encounter considering Sousuke somewhat indifference in other \"romantic\" situations in the series keep it going good stuff
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be an excellent story, I\'ve been waiting for a FMP lemon for ages, ever since I started watching the series. Very well written, and I love the teasing Kaname, to me it seems like the sort of thing she\'d love to do to Sousuke if she was in the mood.
Please write the next chapter!!
Please write the next chapter!!
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting take on the perspective within the series. I particularly liked the fact that Sousuke isn\'t the \'clueless military buff\' he is so often portrayed to be. It will be interesting to see what happens next...poor Sousuke\'s in a bind isn\'t he?
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
finally a fmp lemon fanfic! I love the story, although kaname is a little out of character... I can\'t really ever...see her acting like that, but o well keep up the good work, hope to see more soon!