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~Teri

Hi. I'm insanely curiousknowknow where the rest of this story is b/c I refuse to believe it ends right there with no hope of ever being continued. I checked your profile hoping you had a website where you were updating but no such luck. Please say you're still working on this and have merely been temporarily set back. Please. It's hard to find good Gojyo/Hakkai fics and this really has me going with it. Hope to see more in the future!

WOW! Absolutely amazing... please please please continue! Your characterizations are awesome, and you have so much good detail! I can\'t wait to read more! :)

OH DEAR GODS!! Keep going!!

I resisted reading this because it was incomplete, but ---sigh--- I\'m such a sucker.....

I really enjoyed the smoothness of your style. Everything seems to flow right to the next…very good. My eyes seemed to glide down the screen…..excellent.

Your verbiage is excellent! Simple and yet complex. Your syntax compliments the verbiage supremely .

Additionally, this chapter is technically sound.

Of course the subject matter is simply…beautiful. I’m SUCH a sucker.

Bravo!

[mumble --- I wish I could write like that….why do I even bother….]

I havent gotten to watch alot of Saiyuki but I like Hakkai the best out of all the characters. I think this first chapter is amusing but I wonder what is next. Please finish okay?