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for Donde Estas Corazon

by lutz

person Vic-chan
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.< You just had to do it didn\'t you?! *sputters*
person Mi
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. *wipes tears* The ps2 was posssessed, it had to be dealt with!
I don\'t know if I ever mentioned how much I love the two girls- piercing parlor, doujinshi shop, police academy clerks... The versatility of yaoi fangirls.

I was so worried when Haru got shot! (Now, I hadn\'t been to bed and I was under the influence of Strawberry Pop Tarts, but damn it, I was freaking out!) Poor Haru-chan. Poor Kyou, what would he have ever done without his Haru-chan? (probably would\'ve shot the other bastard, but hey...)

I absolutly love this story. *sniffles* So nice.

I love your humor, too. It\'s striking with wit and random silliness.
(write more stories?)
lovelove,
mi
person Vic-chan
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fweeeeee *dances a jig on the grave of the ebil machine and laughs wildly* I knew you had it in you! *huggles Lutd grd grins* So... since you managed to get rid of the madness and avoid killing Yuki, I have a gift for you *winks and un-calls the pocky factory* A fitting ending to a wonderful story, at least I think so... perhaps a Gaiden about the story Shigure wrote? *pouts prettily*
person Fan Girl
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I downloaded three more episodes today, and I believe the death of the PS2
person Fan Girl
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahem. Sorry, my brother tried to snag the laptop and the review sent before I had finished.

As I was saying... the PS2\'s death was well deserved. Clearly, it was a box full of evil.
person Fan Girl
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My quibbles with this story are minor and few, and have more to do with grammer than anything, and honestly, I could care less.

My knowledge of Fruits Baskets is fairly limited (I\'ve only seen six episodes that I downloaded as of two days agout Kut Kyou always struck me as... well, as straight as they come.

Thank you for shedding a new light on him, and opening the door for all sorts of nummy Yaoi goodness in my mind. *smirk*

I love your portrail of Haru. There\'s just something about him that makes me squeel with delight.

Thank you for filling a little of my time with smiles and nummy smut goodness (though I could do with more smut. Yes. More smut is good for the soul).
person Chibi
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, yes. ^^ ks fks for the beautiful reunion! And really... without at least SOME angst a story is just not as interesting as it could be. But it should be just a little angst and then an overload of fluff. Because fluff is good! XD Lovely chapter as always and poor Kyou, having to be twisted with worry like that. But as it was good, then it\'s all good. Hope to see more soon! XD
person Vic-chan
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomg *hyperventilates* How could you leave Haru shot and us hanging... AND have the nerve to think I\'m gonna uncall that pocky distributor >.< Actually, it\'s very very good and of course we want more, but I\'m with Chibi on this one... I\'ll trust you toe ale all right with the world ~ at least in the HxK world we all know and love so much ^_^
person Chibi
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I didn\'t like you and your stories so much, I\'d want to kill you right about now. >.< ;;O;; Poor Kyou and Haru!! But I\'m trusting your \"little angst-major fluff\" ratio, and the hope that you wouldn\'t kill off one of this perfect pair, and that this doesn\'t have the feeling of an angst fic. So.. well written, as usual. ^^ XP Nice touches all though.. poor Tohru... XD;;; MORE! SOON! Or I will give into my unstable temper...
person Devin
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again!! Yet Again another wonderful addition, to an already wonderful story, I may sound like a teacher when I say this, but keep up the good work!! ^_^
And can we expect anymore S&M scenes >_>\'\' *has a secret love for them* ^_^\'\' not a secret anymore is it? XD

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