rate_review Reviews

good stuff, please update!

Not much to say but NICE JOB!!! I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing I want to point out is on Chapter 16, I think you put in a wrong name. It read \"Kagome\" and I think you intended to put \"Fiona.\" Other than that, your work is awesome! Keep it up.

Ok, I\'va said this before, and I\'ll say it again. I love this story. I do have some slight complaints though. You\'re making them sound a little too proper. I mean honestly, people don\'t talk like that in real life, and they definately didn\'t in the Zoids anime, even if this is an A/U. Try using things like You\'ll and aren\'t instead of you will and are not. It makes things sound a lot more realistic. One more thing. There was a part in the chapter called Fiona\'s Pain where you called her Kagome instead of Fiona. x________x Yeah, go fix that. But other than that, I\'ve got no real gripes about this story. I\'ve got it bookmarked, and I check it everyday to see if you updated. Keep writing, k?

Yay another good chapter. update as soon as you can. l8r

Yay. u updated. 2 chapters!!! glomps u. me happy. i luv all your chapters. they\'re very good. well gtg now. l8r

sweet, but i wish fiona\'s mom got a good ass kicking. awwww poor irvine. guess moonbay is pregnant. well update soon.l8r

great story keeps a good flow and i really wanna read the rest

Great chapter. As always. hope u update soon and more van/fiona fluff n lemons. gtg now. ttyl. l8r

Wow!! I thought that this story was over after that night club thing, but I was reaaly happy when I saw that you made an update!! This is one of my favorite stories on this site, and one of the first that I bookmarked. Please add more!!

P.S.
-If you ever need someone to proof read new chapters or something, then please feel free to email me sometime!!

This story ROCKS!! I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out!! Keep doing what you\'re doing because it is AWESOME!!